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 For those who don’t know, George Edwin Taylor and  Sen. Kamala Harris, are two African Americans who have had a major impact on history. While these two were running for election, they had a lot of obstacles to overcome. Over time history has Changed, we still face the same problems in some way. One of the main problems that they were facing is racism back then it may have been way worse for George Edwin but we still are facing it today. They both want Equality for all African Americans. Also, some of the differences just because of timing back then African Americans have fewer rights than what we do today and George Edwin was trying to change that. Also today we have more problems in the United States that Kamala is trying to change like solving global problems, human rights, and focusing on rebuilding economic strength. So these things are what make these candidates unique in their way.

I need to add more information and reread the paper about these to people to add more details. Add both pictures of each person. Fix grammar also need 300 or more words. Use bigger and better words to improve writing.


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